Development of my story

When I was first developing my story I was inspire by Animes and how characters can fly back in time/ going into another world etc. I really like this idea so I implemented it into my story. Additionally I was inspired by the anime ERASED as I had just finished watching it before I made my final mindmap. At first I wanted to add lots of different elements such as ones that kind of made an escape room so I try to add that in the part of my story where the player has to find a key and unlocked the shelf to find the father diary. While also mainly focusing on the storyline to be my main interests drawer/ retainer. Additionally I like endings where the player kind of wakes up from a dream or in my case they are already dead but had the chance to learn more/ discover what happened in the past.