sketch blog 9

My story mainly revolves around the life of a boy named harry. Harry is a little boy who lives at the bottom of life, but he did not give up on himself like the others. but actively faces life every day, and wants to change his life. But when he grew up, he discovered the dark side of this society, which made him have a huge disappointment and misunderstanding of life. In this case, Harry is likely to lose hope in life and give up on himself, becoming Revenge against social or antisocial people. Or no matter how disappointed and helpless he is in life, he will still face life positively and optimistically and believe that he can change his status quo and become the person he wants to be. I think the reason why my story is more interesting or compelling is that I think everyone has a period when they are full of doubts or misunderstandings about life and society, and some people choose a way to continue their life and may go in another direction, but some people will choose to stick to being themselves and stick to it to the end, and finally become who they want to be. I think these things can happen to everyone and every period, so my player is mainly focusing on teenagers, but not limited to teenagers.

the paragraph above was my proposal for the first time, but while I was working through my stories, I changed up a little bit compared to before. but the main theme is still the same. where I changed is he has to make some bad choices at the beginning, rather than the reader can let him make the better choice. Because I think sometimes when we make choices, we don’t have a chance to decide. sometimes we have to make a choice that we don’t want to make. and later on, why he changes his mind I changed to—-he recognized himself in the gang who he really wants to be, which leads to two directions: 1. be in the gang 2. decide to quit. rather than what I have before which is he sees the dark side of society.